The hook I am going to use is: Question.
What do you like about year 5 and 6 camp? I really like camp. My favourite part of camp is playing with the games in the hall. My favourite thing to do in the hall is to play on the little trampoline doing flips and dancing statue on the stage. Walt: hook our audience.
Hi Charles Nice writing like how you told your audience what your favourite activity was!
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awesome work I like the pitcher you got
ReplyDeletehi charles nice work keep it up
ReplyDeleteGreat work Charles but your real name is rarles keep up the good work rarles
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DeleteSup Charles cool Work I like that u said u did flips on the trampaline because that was the thing we anyways i enjoyed reading your work
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Hi Charles I like your awesome work and I Like you pitcher
ReplyDeleteHi Charles I like your awesome work and I Like you pitcher
ReplyDeleteHi Charles I like the way you used Question,and said what do you like about the year 5 and 6 camp.Also when you said you Liked playing games in the hall.Me to liked playing in the hall to.Well Done Charles. Keep Up The Good Work.
ReplyDeleteHey Charles it sounded like you had so much fun in the hall. I can't wait as well to play all the games in the hall. As if you know this is my 2nd time at camp. Do you remember when I was in your group last year for camp. Cool Work. I can't wit till camp tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteHey Charles it sounded like you had so much fun in the hall. I can't wait as well to play all the games in the hall. As if you know this is my 2nd time at camp. Do you remember when I was in your group last year for camp. Cool Work. I can't wit till camp tomorrow.
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