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Monday 9 May 2016

Dictogloss


W\ham!!! The door slams behind me as I fall into the house. The whooshing of the wind can be heard from the walls. Clink Clink Clink hail began to fall against the wall making my head spin. If only I was home alone. Crash!!! Hellooo Anyone there I call into the darkness all a sudden Mum’s spotted cat comes tearing across the kitchen floor into my arms Purr, Purr, I'm glad someone is home to greet me.

Mrs Moala read us a paragraph the black writing is mine the red writing is the word I mist.

1 comment:

  1. Nice job Charles on your first dictogloss! I would love to see you pay more attention to the punctuation of the paragraph next time (commas, full stops, etc)

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