On the 1st of September we made butter in our literacy class. We got into a big circle and Miss Garden poured half a jar of cream. Then she passed it around the circle and we all had a shake each until the cream is all thick.
I never knew butter is so simple to make. All you need is just two ingredients which is a little pinch of salt and cream. We put our ingredients into a jar and shake it for 12 mins. Then it becomes BUTTER !!!
YAY! the butter is done. We each get a piece of fresh bread to eat with our homemade butter. The butter was very soft. I like it soft so it easy to spread the butter on the bread. The butter was so
delicious I had another piece of bread with butter yummy.
I love butter. My favorite part when we were making butter Is when I had a taste of it. Butter, Butter, Butter.
I agree your introduction is clear, we just need to work on hooking in your reader. Try and use some of the techniques we have been practising in class Charles.
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